Sala (Hiatus)

hola people, this book is like about friends fighting each other. By hte way if story changes forgive me because for now only 1 chapter is there which I read. thank you

Bro you should look out for the details and keep the story and character development in check so you dont confuse us please create a structure for the story and memorise the character leveling up and status developing updated based on it's previous state

Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!

so far so good. apparently other reviews have said previous books drop but hopefully it's not the case here

So much to do, so much to see

She is the most beautiful woman a man could ever hoped for. Her sexy figure with the most prominent S-line, long silky wavy black hair dangling back and forth, her emotionless face with the most alluring make up could make even men faint. As she walks into the building, she expected nothing less from tabloids, paparazzis, and journalists. Being the President's daughter, she remained composed in every situation.

He was about to release her, when—

Then Minerva said to Jove, "Father, son of Saturn, king of kings, answer me this question- What do you propose to do? Will you set them fighting still further, or will you make peace between them?"